desert heart

Rules for 7S- four line poems, syllable counts 1,2,3,1- the poem will have to make an impact-psychological, sensual or otherwise.

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4 comments

  1. eta bong-to-bong request-er reply…
    onek gulo kobita porla.. porey ekta jinis first mathay elo.. creations are like little offsprings, and usually we are always proud of them and have a soft corner. Amar mone achhe jokhon ami du-ke jon bhalo critique peyechhilam, tader modhye ekjon chhilo je khub blatantly critisize korto.. on the face of it.. bhison rag hoto.. shamuker moto kholoshe dhuke jetam..

    on the other hand – had someone special for a while, je kina khub logically ar objectively critisize korto, tar thekeo boro kotha, amar besi bhag lekhar bhetorer lekhatar mane bujhto.. lekha actual wavelength-ta dhore phelto. Ar hoyto sei jonnoi tar critismta amar kachhe onek besi acceptable chhilo – ar help korto to write better.

    With that background.. tomar lekhagulo pore, broadly duto group pelam. Prothomta sudhu kichhu dekhe anonde likhe phelam, ar olpo koekta jeno mone holo kichhu deep bhabnar phosol. At the same time, all of them are your feeling, so cant say any one of them bad. they are not. Creative people mostly create for their own satisfaction, and they get boosted when someone else likes them. But they are multiplied when they actually gets connected with the same wavelength with the reader.

    Amar mone holo, tomer besh koekta lekha, kichhuta edit ar kichhuta second thought diley aro onek gun bhalo hoye jeto ! Kichhu achhe jegulo absolute classic, kichhu jeno ektu ojotne rakha chhele pile! 🙂

    1. i was once a member of a critique circle, okhane aami dekhechhilam je doo dharaner criticism hoy constructive ar destructive. taar pore ekti bishesh bostu oi site take use kore amaar computer e hack korte shuru korlo tai siteta use kara chhede dite holo, mohila ekhono stalk koren tabe wordpress bodh hoy jut korte parenna. ekhan shudhu alada alada naam use kore harass koren.

      ei blogta anyo blog gulo theke ekebare alada- tumi theek guess korechho egulo akebare whimsical- just khela kara akshar ar chhobir songe, etaar moodta erakam i rakhbo. nahale dekhoni e maaser ekta post-o bodh-hoy keu pareni 🙂 ta satweo ei theme tai cholbe agami maas porjonto.

      ei blogtar swamini holo muse, or nick name fantasia aami shudhu or whim tamil korar jonnyo achchhi o bhabte pare kintu likhte ba aankte parena 🙂 tai amake bhor kore.

      1. Jio ! I liked your Muse / Fantasia !

        ar mohila mohilake stalk korchhe sune moja laglo ! ..ahem… 😉

        btw – your decision to keep it as it is.. shows je tumi creativity-r oi niyomta manchho.. shristir nesha shristi koray ! amio theek tai kori.. but kokhono sokhono ke kichhu bolle bhalo lage ! Chaliye jao!

      2. sei jonnei ami shudhumatro ei blog to fantasia ke utsorgo korechhi, baki blog gulo bastab jagater ami lekhe fantasia shudhu chhnoa day.

        mohilati moteo subidher bostu noy nahale amio hastam

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